There were so many little details that made this so bitter-sweet and almost painful to read. You really showed Vash's inner conflicts well. I liked the little tidbit with Vash fixing Roderich's appearance. To me it really shows that Vash really did respect and care for the Austrian. And the way he just kept choking on the phrase was sad to see but also somewhat sweet knowhing that he did care enough to force himself to say it out loud at least once.
I really do love your fanfics. This particular story is sad because of the character death yet there was some closure with the final line. Good job.
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Date: 2010-06-21 08:04 am (UTC)There were so many little details that made this so bitter-sweet and almost painful to read. You really showed Vash's inner conflicts well. I liked the little tidbit with Vash fixing Roderich's appearance. To me it really shows that Vash really did respect and care for the Austrian. And the way he just kept choking on the phrase was sad to see but also somewhat sweet knowhing that he did care enough to force himself to say it out loud at least once.
I really do love your fanfics. This particular story is sad because of the character death yet there was some closure with the final line. Good job.